Albin's English Journal

It’s as sweet as sugar and I can’t resist
She is the full package and is worth it
She stands out and feels just like a soft kiss
I feel like I only have one chance to win

So I don’t really want to miss that one chance
When i see the colour of pink I think….
What would I do with out her, I would die
I want to see her every day, that’s my dream

I would do anything to see her again
But I just can’t afford the price of her
The price goes up but The taste stays the same.

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