What is my sonnet about?
What is your view on my sonnet and if you like is or not say why?
What do you think I could have done to improve my sonnet?
What was your favourite verse and why?
What do you think the second paragraph was about?
How do you think I could have related to what I was talking about in more detail?
Make a sentence up about the sonnet?
June 28, 2013 at 11:42 am
1) your sonnet is about prawn cocktail crips, when you talk about the colour pink, prices increasing
2) i like how you disgusided the crips as a women
3) an extra paragraph would of been good and read over your work, as some verses do not ryhme
4) i like your opening paragraph
5) how much you miss her
6) added an extra paragraph which would of given more detail
7) good sonnet but should read kver it as the lines you should of ryhmed, didnt